Temariix's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deadly Cliffs]

Eh, ok animation

But I think what I really laughed at was the bonus audio. That was probably my favorite part in this whole thing. You should try to write for some kind of funny flash instead of sticks fighting... or something XD anyway, nice work, well done.

TheMillz responds:

That's kool, glad you liked the bonus

[Submit]

Good overall..

But there was only a small amount of animation. It was good animation though :P
The background were superb, and fit the movie, but I felt that the music did not flow along with the movie. It seemed almost too slow, not epic enough. Well.. epic enough... urg.. lemme try to explain.
In the begining, it should be slow, and kind of dramatic, but not into anything deep yet. When it reaches the doors that open, it goes into a huge fanfare, but when you see the portal, then it's an epic kind of music, but not as loud or dramatic as the fanfare. Once it get's to the portal, the end of the movie, it's a very epic part, wrapping up everything that happened.

Now, I'm not sure where you'd be able to get music like that, but it would add an overall better effect :P

Good work ^_^

Masonogy1 responds:

I sorta understand.. lol... Thanks for the advice!

[Clock Day '06: The 'B'ee]

OMG, great job!

I have one short word... WOW! That came a long way from when you showed me last! It looks fantastic! The score you have aint bad either ;) (I fived! w00t!)
I dont really know squat about the CC, but I assume 'B' has something to do with it :P I found this movie funny, and fun to watch.
OMG, I SAW MY NAME IN THE CREDITS! I'd like to thank all the little people who helped me get to this point. lol (joking) this is (that I know of) the first time I was in the credits without actually working on it! w00t! It's a big day for me! lol

Congratulations, good job, and a score well earned :D Have fun with your success!!!

BoltClock responds:

Thank you and I love you for:

- Teh fifen.
- My score ain't bad o.O It's true :)
- "funny, and fun to watch" <3
- Your support.
- Everything else.

Happy Clock Day <3

[Vancouver Flash]

Great advertisement!

The flash seemed to flow very smoothly, and the pictures were fabulous. This is a really good advertisment that travel agents could use for their webpages and such. The only thing I would change is that when the buildings and ships go into lime green lines, make the fill solid black so the stars dont shine through, when the stars shine through it seems unprofessional, other than that awsome job!

TheMint400 responds:

ahhh thanks for the comment!! i will def check that out.. the thing is i made the buildings semi-transparent on purpose (took a bunch longer too) but i agree it doesn't seem to work in the last scene in particular (with creds). thank you!

[-Brand Names-]

Apple conquers all!

I really enjoyed it to be honest. The concept was great, but the plot could have been a bit longer or intense. The music didnt exaclty fit the scene, but in a weird sort of way it did. Try giving each brand name a different style music, such as Apple having some famous anthem that has a chorus (Orff: Carmina Burana - O Fortuna, or Mozart: Requiem - Dies Irae) and when another logo comes in, their 'theme song' begins. does that make sense?

the graphics werent "OMG, I must shrine them!" but they werent bad either. Also, the background could have looked a bit nicer since it didnt change during the whole movie
Keep up the good work, I see some great potential!

sams11 responds:

Apple did rule untill it melted for no reason =P

Cheers for the review man.

[Nature In All Its Glory]

glad you submitted!

im happy you decided to submit ^_^ im too much of a coward to submit mine.. it would probably be blammed though, it wasnt so good in the first place eh? o well, and congratz on the high rating!

JorNcar responds:

thanks... you should still try and submit yours though.. no matter how good or bad it is. take some time and touch it up.

[Force 8 Trailer]

wow! keep up the good work

great work on the graphics! the sound could have been a bit better as well. and one sugestion, i think you had the frame rate set at 12, it made the fading in and out a bit choppy. next time try 24 or somewhere around there. other than that great job and i cant wait to see the final piece!

Rinoa-angel responds:

heya thnx! I've made improvements 2 the frame rate like you sed. I also added these improvements to my current mini project! hey let me know if you wanna talk on msn messenger! I appreciate the help! :D