Temariix's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[help me daddy !!!]

Woah, great job!

I'm having to watch this a few times to fully understand what's going on, but definatly freaked me out :D I didnt have a clue what was going on (still kinda dont >.<) and it definatly kept me until the end, keep up the good work dude!

[banana phone terror]

Freakin hilarious!

In it's simplicity, it is amazing! lol, bannana phone for uses of terrorism? Great idea!
The Bush working for Ladin thing was expected though, and you should have made Bush more of a coward in the 'fight'.
Other than that, great job :D Got a ton a laughs out of this one

[Naruto ANBU Spare Time]

Flippin' hillarious!

For people who dont read or watch the series, they wont understand this, but being an avid Naruto fan, I LMAO!
Keep up the good work!
Hilarious :P

[Pretty Baby]

Good work!

This is a definate improvement from your first animation (that one was good too though)
At times the color seemed a bit sloppy, but other than that it was good.
btw, I cant remember, but are you going to make a Force 8 series? or did you just make the trailer for a series never to be? anyways, good work and keep it up :)

[Flash Project]

Great work!

Even without sound, this was pretty awsome! I see a lot of promise in you as an animator. Keep up the good work!
(and if you get the chance, add sound)

[Vancouver Flash]

Great advertisement!

The flash seemed to flow very smoothly, and the pictures were fabulous. This is a really good advertisment that travel agents could use for their webpages and such. The only thing I would change is that when the buildings and ships go into lime green lines, make the fill solid black so the stars dont shine through, when the stars shine through it seems unprofessional, other than that awsome job!

TheMint400 responds:

ahhh thanks for the comment!! i will def check that out.. the thing is i made the buildings semi-transparent on purpose (took a bunch longer too) but i agree it doesn't seem to work in the last scene in particular (with creds). thank you!

[-Brand Names-]

Apple conquers all!

I really enjoyed it to be honest. The concept was great, but the plot could have been a bit longer or intense. The music didnt exaclty fit the scene, but in a weird sort of way it did. Try giving each brand name a different style music, such as Apple having some famous anthem that has a chorus (Orff: Carmina Burana - O Fortuna, or Mozart: Requiem - Dies Irae) and when another logo comes in, their 'theme song' begins. does that make sense?

the graphics werent "OMG, I must shrine them!" but they werent bad either. Also, the background could have looked a bit nicer since it didnt change during the whole movie
Keep up the good work, I see some great potential!

sams11 responds:

Apple did rule untill it melted for no reason =P

Cheers for the review man.

[School Madness]

wow

that was great, lol, everything was just fine, and then he gets shot and Gladiator music plays! LMAO! and the final words were so touching, lol

I loved how you kept making sure everyone he had killed was still there if the guy went back to a certain room, or when the celing fell, most people wouldnt do that

the reason i gave you a 5 on your style is because it wasnt totaly original, since it was basically a remake of krinkle's madness series, but it was your style in the same because you added your other movie into it.

I loved how you had the swooping camera in the hallway, it made the room seem 3D

Good job overall!

[Dont Drink and Drive]

good point but...

i like the point.. but the art was kind of bleh. you probably got a good grade at school too. if you would ever want, you could probably find someone who is better at the artsy stuff and have them do out what you want but then its your story and.... yeah ill shut up now

[Tribute to Hinata]

great work!

i love hinata! i loved the concept too! the graphics could have been better, but this is your first time, and very good mind you.. i know how hard it is to use a mouse.. i have to use one and im left handed x_X keep up the good work though!