sticks?...
the way you use stick figures is great, just cause its a stick figure doesnt mean it has to be bad animation right? i really enjoyed it, the animation flowed smoothely and i loved the humor, ill keep my eyes out for more of these if you decide to make more 'The Teatons'
not very good
first i will point out the bad parts
1. too short
2. bad audio, i couldnt hear them talking and the sfx were horrible
3. use voice actors who are past puberty
4. work on the grafics, they were pretty bad
5. the begining menu buttons are hard to click because you only have the text clickable and not the area around it
6. i didnt even understand the plot, wow... a person is trying to kill a person, but where did these people come from?!
good things
1. um.... the extra sleep i got was nice
just keep working and submit when you are ready
glad you submitted!
im happy you decided to submit ^_^ im too much of a coward to submit mine.. it would probably be blammed though, it wasnt so good in the first place eh? o well, and congratz on the high rating!
thanks... you should still try and submit yours though.. no matter how good or bad it is. take some time and touch it up.
wow! keep up the good work
great work on the graphics! the sound could have been a bit better as well. and one sugestion, i think you had the frame rate set at 12, it made the fading in and out a bit choppy. next time try 24 or somewhere around there. other than that great job and i cant wait to see the final piece!
heya thnx! I've made improvements 2 the frame rate like you sed. I also added these improvements to my current mini project! hey let me know if you wanna talk on msn messenger! I appreciate the help! :D
cows!
that was funny! hehe, im still laughing. those expresions were priceless!
actually, for some reason the end reminded me of family guy...
still funny though!
good work!
ah man do i love naruto! for sprites, that was awsome! you captured the intensity of the show plus it looked good in the process. keep up the good work!
(good song too, i say that is the best begining in the series)
great work!
dreams can make great stories, this one not excluded! the storyline seems to jump a little bit with the werewolf, but thats ok because it was a dream so yea... you did a good job with the shading, it made it look like something from an old comic book, that was what you were aiming for right? overall great job and keep up the good work.
i didnt really get it
well, its a good concept, but i dont understand some of it, it was a bit "chunky"
maybe if you added some more animation or text maybe?
the music could have been better as well
overall good work
great work!
that was very nicely done! espcialy the way you made the camera (view) go around and stuff, it was very smooth flowing, there could have been a bit more comedy though, i laughed at the mufasa cloud though ^_^ keep up the good work
great work!
wow, the final, or close to final, if you would make it longer, came out really nice! im glad you finished it! if you want to make it more of a music violence vid you could sinc in the bunches and kicks more maybe?:P i dunno, it was good either way, glad you got it done
I used to art. A lot. Then I became a programmer. Then I got burnt out. Now I'm trying to recover that passion.
Age 33, Female
Used to be a softwar
United States
Joined on 12/29/04
The Teatons 
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Nature In All Its Glory 
The Mad Cow 
Naruto - Go !!! 
The Mask and the Monster 
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