You have a very nice piece here. Very emotional as well.
If I might make a suggestion though, I'm not sure if it's just the program you're using, but when the upper strings are playing to compliment the cello, I think that they should decrescendo instead of crescendoing and then just stopping. I hope that makes sense XD It just kind of takes away the overall effect.
Nice work ^_^
Yeah, I see what you mean there. However, having the strings fading like that is REALLY typical of sad pieces, and I try to stay away from the norm in my compositions. Well, the strings are crescendoing, but the cutoffs make it more unpredictable (though the notes last the same length in each measure). But anyway, it would have a softer sound with the fade; I did consider it. I just decided against it : D Thanks for pointing that out though.
Glad you enjoyed the piece.
I adore piano music, and you pulled this one off great.
Everything is in order amazingly, the pianos, fortes, ect. The chords are great.
To be honest, I dont personally know about piano music, only listen to it. But you have yourself a superior piece!
I cant wait to hear more from you.
that was really good, i dont have too much suggestions, but i really like it right now! keep up the good work. i hope to see it finished soon! i gave it a five :P
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